Cream Pours Like Snow Falls
Haiku with high tea
Best to sip slowly
Don't brew the oolong
too long
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Haiku with high tea
Best to sip slowly
Don't brew the oolong
too long
Note: Click and scroll HERE for more teapoet poems.
Comments
While your poem is lovely and warm, that tea will leave you cold.
Dismal
Posted by: Nessa | February 9, 2010 12:31 PM
Must have brewed too long.
Posted by: colleen | February 9, 2010 12:59 PM
You couldn't resist, could you? too long oolong - Beth will love you!
Posted by: Jeff | February 9, 2010 7:50 PM
I LOVE This Colleen! Great Picture and a Great Poem, too...!
Posted by: OldOldLady Of The Hills | February 10, 2010 3:44 AM
I can't help but think of our forts when we were younger. xoxo
Posted by: Sherry | February 10, 2010 7:46 AM
Your cups overflow with snow!
Posted by: Poe | February 10, 2010 9:12 AM
You are so clever Miss Punster..sandy
Posted by: sandy | February 10, 2010 9:53 AM
I still love the idea of outside forts. My last time in town, I stopped and took some pictures of a boy digging a big hole in the snow that he said was a fort for the paper. A part of me wanted to play with him!
After posting this I realized I had posted the picture before. But the poem is new to the blog, from my TEAPOET chapbook. http://www.looseleafnotes.com/notes/2008/11/coming_soon_to_a_teaspoon_near.html
Posted by: colleen | February 10, 2010 11:02 AM
>Don't brew the oolong
too long
Niiiiiice!
Posted by: Pearl | February 10, 2010 12:07 PM
Hee,hee...Jeff was right----I LOVE the oolong/too long rhyme! I think you delight in word play almost as much as I do. :-)
Posted by: Beth | February 10, 2010 12:46 PM
At least as much, or more, Beth. We are "blown away" right now with wind gusts. Had to close down the doggie door brrrr.
Posted by: colleen | February 10, 2010 1:21 PM
love this. your rhyming brought a smile, and the photo is perfect even if it appeared before!
Posted by: sky | February 15, 2010 2:54 PM