http://www.looseleafnotes.com/wp/2010/02/morning-whales/ "A blog is to a writer what a canvas is to an artist." ~ Colleen Redman Thu, 09 Feb 2012 09:57:51 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 http://www.looseleafnotes.com/wp/2010/02/morning-whales/comment-page-1/#comment-21846 Sherry Thu, 25 Feb 2010 21:50:44 +0000 http://www.looseleafnotes.com/wp/2010/02/morning-whales/#comment-21846 Great imagery !! Great imagery !!

]]> http://www.looseleafnotes.com/wp/2010/02/morning-whales/comment-page-1/#comment-21845 SandyCarlson Wed, 24 Feb 2010 20:52:15 +0000 http://www.looseleafnotes.com/wp/2010/02/morning-whales/#comment-21845 Oh, waking up! Yeah. Beautiful. Oh, waking up! Yeah. Beautiful.

]]> http://www.looseleafnotes.com/wp/2010/02/morning-whales/comment-page-1/#comment-21844 Nessa Wed, 24 Feb 2010 12:35:47 +0000 http://www.looseleafnotes.com/wp/2010/02/morning-whales/#comment-21844 Your collage is fascinating. I can lose myself in it. Your poem is so thoughtful. <a href="http://vanessavkilmer.com/?p=1623" rel="nofollow">WW - Toil and Trouble</a> Your collage is fascinating. I can lose myself in it. Your poem is so thoughtful.
WW – Toil and Trouble

]]> http://www.looseleafnotes.com/wp/2010/02/morning-whales/comment-page-1/#comment-21843 colleen Wed, 24 Feb 2010 10:26:35 +0000 http://www.looseleafnotes.com/wp/2010/02/morning-whales/#comment-21843 So true, Kenju. But sometimes I rip off the covers like I rip off a bandaid and leap out of bed to get it over with. Sky, part of the collage is from a photo taken near you. The two people are walking on the coast of Oregon. Far to the right is a giant sea stack rock. The puddle reflection was taking in Virginia Beach. Tabor, now I have a picture of you as a whale breaking through red wave of covers. Hey, I wonder if the poem every would have come about if my comforter was anything but royal blue. This poem is a re-write from an older version, more than 10 years old. So true, Kenju. But sometimes I rip off the covers like I rip off a bandaid and leap out of bed to get it over with.
Sky, part of the collage is from a photo taken near you. The two people are walking on the coast of Oregon. Far to the right is a giant sea stack rock. The puddle reflection was taking in Virginia Beach.
Tabor, now I have a picture of you as a whale breaking through red wave of covers. Hey, I wonder if the poem every would have come about if my comforter was anything but royal blue. This poem is a re-write from an older version, more than 10 years old.

]]> http://www.looseleafnotes.com/wp/2010/02/morning-whales/comment-page-1/#comment-21842 Tabor Wed, 24 Feb 2010 10:24:43 +0000 http://www.looseleafnotes.com/wp/2010/02/morning-whales/#comment-21842 A really wonderful comparison. I can feel it and it certainly fit my mood this morning...although my waves were red. A really wonderful comparison. I can feel it and it certainly fit my mood this morning…although my waves were red.

]]> http://www.looseleafnotes.com/wp/2010/02/morning-whales/comment-page-1/#comment-21841 kenju Wed, 24 Feb 2010 09:45:25 +0000 http://www.looseleafnotes.com/wp/2010/02/morning-whales/#comment-21841 Very good; only I'm not diving - more like dipping my toes in. Very good; only I’m not diving – more like dipping my toes in.

]]> http://www.looseleafnotes.com/wp/2010/02/morning-whales/comment-page-1/#comment-21840 sky Wed, 24 Feb 2010 04:41:15 +0000 http://www.looseleafnotes.com/wp/2010/02/morning-whales/#comment-21840 this rhythm feels perfect as it rolls off the tongue. greattttt, colleen! such a nice wordplay of transition in body, time, and temperature. this rhythm feels perfect as it rolls off the tongue. greattttt, colleen! such a nice wordplay of transition in body, time, and temperature.

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