Where I'm From
“We are born in a certain time and a certain place and like vintage wines we retain the flavor of our origins.” ~ Carl Jung
"Where I'm From” is inspired by George Ella Lyon's poem of the same name, from the book "Where I'm From, Where Poetry Comes From." I first learned of it from my fellow Floydian friend Fred First on his Fragments From Floyd (can you say that 5 times fast) blog. If you would like to try your own version, see the template for the poem here. “Where I'm From” (which Fred affectionately refers to as WIF) has been making its way around the blogsphere and provides a fun way to express your unique sense of place while getting to know others. See my attempt below and see a collection of them at Pratie Place.
Where I’m From
I am from a granite boulder seawall
and cotton candy at Paragon Park
I’m from blackberry stains and beach rose petals
catalpa beans and bamboo
I am from my father’s eyes
after he saw the holocaust at Buchenwald
and the nape of my mother’s neck
where white pearls hung
before her thyroid surgery
I am from Hail Mary full of grapes
midnight mass and pennies in the poor box
I’m from the unlucky luck of the Irish
the old sod and Southie
before there were gangsters
I am from A your Adorable
B you’re so Beautiful
God Bless Mommy and Daddy
Jimmy and Kathy
Colleen and Danny
Sherry and Johnny
Joey and Bobby and Trish
I am from the salt of the earth
One if by land, two if by sea
John F. Kennedy and Fenway Park
even when the Red Sox are losing
I’m from ice skates and alphabet streets
jump ropes and black and white TV
I’m not from the farm or the city
I’m from plastic flowers in the village cemetery
and horseshoe crabs with blue blood
I’m from my grandmother’s picnic basket
sleeping on curlers in baby doll pajamas
kerchiefs and bobby socks
hoola hoops and the twist
Dear Diary today is Friday
I’m from a one pot New England boiled dinner
from steamed clams dipped in real butter
and playing monopoly during a hurricane
by a kerosene lamp in our kitchen
Comments
What a fantastic poem! How wonderfully creative you are. Although, I think your brain is like a sieve...or you really like your story about Steven Tyler visiting in MA. Did you realize you left the same comment in differing variations 3 times on two different days?? I think your ghost is back, only this time it's in reappearing ink ;0) LOL!
Posted by: J&J's Mom | April 7, 2005 9:39 PM
That was wonderful. BTW, the two previous Post, were also very interesting. My husband, has learned so much about me through my blog, and he's definitely my favorite reader. heehee. : ) We have had some very intimate conversation or heated discussions, depending on the Post.
Posted by: Truewillow | April 8, 2005 12:20 AM
Oh, I love yours. That was such a fun exercise for me, but difficult, too.
Posted by: terrilynn | April 8, 2005 8:23 AM
This is really well done with an emotive hardworking set of details picked out. I've been trying to do one for days but can't seem to find the details, the rhythm or contain it to something focused and short as the form.
Posted by: Pearl | April 9, 2005 4:40 PM
Hi Colleen,
Thanks for stopping by my place today. Your WIF is lovely. I loved the exercise of writing mine, both the dredging up of memories and the paring down to what seemed most essential.
Posted by: Kimberly | April 16, 2005 3:57 PM
Hi Colleen, I did this writing exercise. It sure felt good, thanks.
Posted by: Carol | April 18, 2006 12:03 AM
You did a wonderful job with this Colleen. I gather you're a New Englander through and through.
Posted by: Barbara | April 20, 2006 2:22 PM
Colleen, you did a wonderful job on the Where I'm From poem! I really enjoyed reading it, and I have been threatening to write one for myself - but it wouldn't be as good as yours!
Posted by: kenju | October 2, 2007 2:39 PM
truly adore it when was it written?
Posted by: sandykessler | October 3, 2007 8:25 AM
this is the best poem i have read it speaks to me in many ways
Posted by: Blaise | October 21, 2007 11:27 AM
Have you read Alistair MacLeod's, "No Great Mischief"? This poem (and I love it!) reminds me of his book.
Kat
Posted by: Poetikat | May 11, 2008 11:45 AM
Thank you for adding me to your links. I have taken on the challenge of this poem and posted it today. Yours was so inspirational and evocative. I hope I've done the process justice.
Kat
Posted by: Poetikat | May 12, 2008 8:52 PM